This little song does sound amazing, but the ending seems a little abrupt, don't you think? Your work is very impressive, but to me this song just seems half finished. Other than that, keep up the good work!
It actually is half finished. I sent this piece to the guy I made it for to see what he thought so far, and he said it was fine as-is. So, that's why it is posted here in its current state.
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